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In the body of the essay, you must describe the debate over globalization and inequality. It is easier to describe the arguments on one side of the debate, and then the arguments on the other side. However, you can also show points of contention as you move along.

Essays are written in paragraphs. Paragraphs are usually given to one central idea. Very often the idea is stated in the first sentence of the paragraph. Here is an example:

None of this addresses another of Mr Wade's arguments: that inequality is a bad thing in itself, regardless of the extent of poverty. Many people would agree with that--though it has some strange implications. One is that you could regard a country with more equality as a greater success than another, even if the egalitarian country had not merely lower incomes on average, but also more people in absolute poverty. Mr Wade's points about inequality and social stress are well taken. Yet pulling up the poor still seems a nobler calling than pulling down the rich.

The paragraph is about whether “inequality is a bad thing in itself, regardless of the extent of poverty.” Each sentence in this paragraph is clearly related to the first sentence.

When you check your paragraphs, make sure that every sentence is clearly related to the first sentence.

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